by xnpd
Well, this was another superbly written chapter of this story. Your description of the people and their surroundings was spot on as usual. But I've got to say I'm more than a little disappointed that Zach and the ginger didn't suffer any retribution for their attack on Paulie. I would have loved to have seen them get a taste of their own medicine. I doubt that anything will come of this, but I be here waiting on further chapters to find out. Thanks, MLF
Intense installment. Wild coming of age for Paulie. Such great character development that I absolutely despise Zach and the ginger. A bit of boundary setting with Mario? A nod to safe sex? Fantastic.
This is such a great story! I will never checking every day for the next chapter!