All Comments on 'Big-dick Bottom Pt. 09'

by xnpd

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dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

I am honestly awed by the way this is developing. This is masterpiece level stuff, xnpd. Flawless and brutally flawed too. Paulie is a perpetual phoenix, rising again and again. A visit to the right reverend for him, the man of god, to shoot his shot next. I suspect his actions will speak louder than his words. Beyond Five Stars

StraycatndcStraycatndcalmost 2 years ago

I’m really loving this story. Is it wrong of me to want Paulie and Son#1 to end up together?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yeah, well Ben got what he deserved. Don't know how they did it, don't care, the SOB got what he deserved!!! And that's coming from someone who doesn't believe in violence. When everyone including the police were covering for Ben, there really wasn't another choice. But I'm sure those same people would have offered their thoughts and prayers to the grandmother after he'd murdered Stacy. Speaking of prayers though, I wonder just how long the meeting will last before Paul is having sex with Reverend Bjornsson. ;-) Once again, you've written a ***** plus chapter that kept me on the edge the whole time reading it. Can't wait for part 10. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing writing as always. So enthralling I forget to jerk off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Paul is enduring unthinkable crimes and sexual atrocities and yet no one is held accountable or pays for the abuse they’ve doled out to him. Mario is using him, son #1 is using him, the Ginger and his dad are straight up criminals, Kevin is more a rapist and criminal than he is a cop, his ex-friend Zach is a rapist, and many guys on P’s pizza routes have used him repeatedly. And of all of these the only one who has gotten any payback was Ben -and that was for what he did to Stacy. No one pays for the hell that Paul endures. But Paul has brought much of this on himself so it’s kinda hard to even feel sorry for him. The story is getting so dark and twisted, and so many have wildly mistreated Paul, that it is hard to care or stay interested in the tale. I don’t think this type of abuse is hot at all, and for one, would like some accountability from these dirtball characters, and would like to see Paul show some self-respect and make good choices to better his life. As it is, he’s not going to survive much longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It is really the longest summer story I have ever read. Still the mystery revealed more and more.

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