All Comments on 'Big-dick Bottom Pt. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There wasn't really anything sexy here.

I like that there is a little resolution, but this chapter seems like filler. There wasn't much progression - which would be fine if there was a good sex scene, but the rape scene wasn't even fetishly sexy. Personally, I'm tired of Paul getting raped. I think it would have been more progressive to the story and sexier if he and the pastor had consented.

I really hope this story gets better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

OH, MY FUCKING GOD!!! I thought this story couldn't get any wilder, I was wrong. I thought Paul would end up having sex with the Reverend, but never imagined anything like this. I don't know what Paul is going to do with pictures, but he should make sure at least one ends up in his parents' hands. Once again, you've wowed me with a ***** plus chapter that's got me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens in #11. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Of many terrible things that have happened to Paulie - with no consequence to the abusers - this may have been the most repugnant. Ignoring the betrayal of a pastor’s behavior, the sheer sadism of this chapter was abhorrent. I hope the Rev gets his just reward for the hundreds of victims he’s defiled and I hope the neighbor dad and ginger get punished as well. Not sure what to make of Son #1’s arrest too. And Mario should also feel bad for the unhealthy relationship he is having with P. Oh and a huge Yay! for Stacy, who is a complete badass for rescuing Paulie!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

Always so much to unpack with Paulie. That the right reverend drugged him with an ‘old fashioned’ is a brilliant detail. Stacy is in absolute killer mode, literally and figuratively. Wonder what happened in the shed this time? Crime scene photos are not a good sign. Maybe Son #1 called the cops? As usual, beyond Five Stars

bienclarbienclaralmost 2 years ago

This is the first chapter that has felt…gratuitous. Like it’s just a throwaway episode padding out the story for its own sake. Really recommend you wrap Paulie’s plot up soon before you properly jump the shark.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

After reading this series, I have to say that you have done an amazing job at capturing the many various aspects of gay life. The lust that one feels while exploring his sexuality. The adventure of engaging in a lifestyle thats new and sometimes dangerous. The fear of what can go wrong and sometimes, right. The truth behind the scenes of a life hidden from those closest to you. Keep up the good work.

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