by xnpd
GREAT JOB!!! I loved this story from beginning to end. And a perfect ending it was. At least the end of this part of Paul's life. Of course, here's nothing that stops you from picking up from where this left off. How about "BIG-DICK BOTTOM, THE COLLEGE YEARS". But whatever you decide, thanks for this one. MLF
Bravo!! Wow what an adventure!! I love your humor and the characters you developed. None of your tricks had names much like my life lol. This story was so much fun to read and I'm sad it has come to an end. How about a Part 3, Paulie's freshman year in college?
Bittersweet and melancholic, but beautiful ending. A new page for Paulie, a new adventure.
It was a great story. I am just a little sad about the open ending with Mario and the neighbour. Any chance for one shots about them?
Great story! Love this series. How about a spin off story about son #1 now that he's alone. Could start the story with his release from custody
Absolutely spectacular, start to finish, every chapter. Your character development is remarkable. Loved hearing so much from Paulie’s mom. Your prose is an absolute pleasure to read. I too would love to hear from the Big-dick freshman if you’re ever moved to revisit Paulie. He’ll live on in my Favorites, that’s for sure. Bravo, xnpd, bravo!
Great series...hoping you have some continuation with Paulie and the rest of the gang! Keep it up!
I love the development of friendship between Paul and Stay. How they saved each other. It seems that you changed your idea in the middle of writing since till the end the elder son of the neighbor still did not get a name. By any means, I am glad you put depth in the story.