All Comments on 'Big Girl Job'

Hell I won't be surprised if Bobby her father doesn't fuck her too, if there is ever another chapter to this story

Other then the Anger Management issues that the MC has that DO need to be addressed it was a pretty good story for what it is. A little more detail in some areas, a little more background in the lead up would have put a really nice polish on the story. I gave a 4/5 and I will be looking for more of your stories, just to see what you can write.

Cheers

Dayum!

Yeah, I agree wth the comments below. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Hope to see a part 2 soon

A bullet usually has no sender on it and it is silent over a long distance. If you think he's bulletproof, don't be fooled. And you can find snipers all over the world for little money. I wouldn't feel safe as Cole anymore!