All Comments on 'Big Sis's Everything'

Interesting. Unlike other stuff I have read here. But I'm not sure I follow everything ... I think the story started in the middle.

boring, repetitive, yawner.

Not sure what I read here, I feel as though we were not privy to the beginning of this story. We needed more explanation how we got here and why. who they were and what they looked like. Not sure to request a second chapter or just another story, maybe both. if you decide a second chapter expand on the subsivesness of big sis. and maybe more detail of their appearance. thanks for sharing. will be looking to hear more from you. let us know what you decide.

Pappasleaze!

Too much talk of nothing happening