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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Small grammatical error, looks like you forgot to reference Avery as "him". Makes it confusing since he's just one person, not multiple.

SianwritesSianwritesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Per the request of the person who commissioned this story, Avery is non-binary so in this instance β€˜they/them’ are the appropriate pronouns :)

RyskyWryterRyskyWryterabout 2 months ago

I'm pretty sure Avery is a female with they, them, pronouns. Very gender inclusive of the author. Great job Sianwrites. I quite enjoyed the story, though the ending seams to either be a lead into a second part, or a slightly morbid end to the main characters. Lol.

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Writing is an outlet for thoughts and desires I can’t normally share. I write mainly short stories that focus on excessive growth and ejaculation. I am open to commissions so if you have something you'd like to see me write, contact me via my Twitter (https://twitter.com/Bole...