All Comments on 'Bilal and the Mountain Queen'

Not gonna lie, kinda wish this had a happy ending.

I wanna see Karsha and Bilal raise kids together.

Very well done. A pleasure to read.

I'm currently writing another Bilal story and I'm planning a series of them, so anything could happen with these two or their potential offspring.

Wow awesome story!

It's a nice story, the scenes are well... I do like the sex scenes, but Karsha seems to be just a bit too soft... And the queen bit too hard, If you would hit on the half way it would be exactly what I would want.

Then again, If Karsha occasionally forgets how much stronger she is, Well that would do the trick too.

It's more the "make me" than the physical punishment that I like, But, that's just my preference.

Due to that, I'd give it 4.5 stars, But as it's impossible, 5 it has to be.

Would like to read more of Bilals adventures if they are anything of the sort.

Dear gosh, there is just so much to unpack here. This is good bordering great on its own, and a masterwork compared to most stories (especially in the "NonHuman") category) on this site.

I wish I had more time and a proper keyboard, but for now please accept my basic, generic compliments. Specifics, I will have to make time for.

Just read your last 2 stories, which I thought were wonderful. I was immersed in to a magical world for a short time. Thank you very much!