by Marvos79
Just read your last 2 stories, which I thought were wonderful. I was immersed in to a magical world for a short time. Thank you very much!
Dear gosh, there is just so much to unpack here. This is good bordering great on its own, and a masterwork compared to most stories (especially in the "NonHuman") category) on this site.
I wish I had more time and a proper keyboard, but for now please accept my basic, generic compliments. Specifics, I will have to make time for.
It's a nice story, the scenes are well... I do like the sex scenes, but Karsha seems to be just a bit too soft... And the queen bit too hard, If you would hit on the half way it would be exactly what I would want.
Then again, If Karsha occasionally forgets how much stronger she is, Well that would do the trick too.
It's more the "make me" than the physical punishment that I like, But, that's just my preference.
Due to that, I'd give it 4.5 stars, But as it's impossible, 5 it has to be.
Would like to read more of Bilals adventures if they are anything of the sort.
I'm currently writing another Bilal story and I'm planning a series of them, so anything could happen with these two or their potential offspring.
Not gonna lie, kinda wish this had a happy ending.
I wanna see Karsha and Bilal raise kids together.