All Comments on 'Billy and His Aunt Ch. 01'
by hjlvr6969
- 18 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLike the first commentor, I also wish that my aunt did that to me. Unfortunately, it was my uncle who made night visits to my room. Good story.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLove it. Next time use her bra cups to catch his load. Or better yet have his Aunt get his Moms bra and tell him as he blows his load.
Littleprickabout 13 years agoYou started well. I hope you continue your story and finish with a treesome with the aunt and the mother.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoYet again another that failed to proof read prior to uploading. Used "come" when the reference should be "cum" how poor and a simple proof reading would have found this.
Anonymousabout 13 years ago"Come" is perfectly fine, as is "cum." Both are slang for ejaculation. "Cum" is not preferred over "come," although it is good form to be consistent. "Cum" is in fact a variant of the original slang term, "come." Forty years ago, probably before that inane asshole was born, "cum" was nowhere to be found. I have little patience for dumbasses who don't know what they are talking about yet espouse it as truth or fact. You probably did not pay much attention to this idiot, hjlvr, and should not given his inability to write a simple sentence without error. It is loaded with mistakes.
hjlvr6969about 13 years agoAuthorThis was my first attempt at writing and I appreciate all the comments, and yes, even the constructive criticism. I hope to contribute many more stories in the near future.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoNext time do alittle more proofreading. Also you left the end of the story in a climax. I do hope there is another part to this story. Other than that you did a good job.
MagnificoGiganticusalmost 13 years agoWe definitely need more... of this series, and of this type of story in general. well written, good dialog. Fantastic!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoThis really needs to go on to more adventurous (and longer) encounters between shy Billy and his Auntie...very good start but cum on - this is merely a teaser!
Anonymousabout 12 years agovery good first chapter; in the next one she should let him cum all over her face; would be nice to have a mom/son blowjob session as well; keep on writing
Anonymousover 10 years agoI thought it was a good story it could of used a little more detail other then that the story was great
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoi imagine my aunt doris jacking my cock while i lick her hot pussy anonymous
highpowererotalmost 2 years agoI just love your stories. You may be my favorite author on this site.
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