by hjlvr6969
I just love your stories. You may be my favorite author on this site.
i imagine my aunt doris jacking my cock while i lick her hot pussy anonymous
I thought it was a good story it could of used a little more detail other then that the story was great
very good first chapter; in the next one she should let him cum all over her face; would be nice to have a mom/son blowjob session as well; keep on writing
This really needs to go on to more adventurous (and longer) encounters between shy Billy and his Auntie...very good start but cum on - this is merely a teaser!
We definitely need more... of this series, and of this type of story in general. well written, good dialog. Fantastic!
Next time do alittle more proofreading. Also you left the end of the story in a climax. I do hope there is another part to this story. Other than that you did a good job.
This was my first attempt at writing and I appreciate all the comments, and yes, even the constructive criticism. I hope to contribute many more stories in the near future.
"Come" is perfectly fine, as is "cum." Both are slang for ejaculation. "Cum" is not preferred over "come," although it is good form to be consistent. "Cum" is in fact a variant of the original slang term, "come." Forty years ago, probably before that inane asshole was born, "cum" was nowhere to be found. I have little patience for dumbasses who don't know what they are talking about yet espouse it as truth or fact. You probably did not pay much attention to this idiot, hjlvr, and should not given his inability to write a simple sentence without error. It is loaded with mistakes.
Yet again another that failed to proof read prior to uploading. Used "come" when the reference should be "cum" how poor and a simple proof reading would have found this.
You started well. I hope you continue your story and finish with a treesome with the aunt and the mother.
Love it. Next time use her bra cups to catch his load. Or better yet have his Aunt get his Moms bra and tell him as he blows his load.
Like the first commentor, I also wish that my aunt did that to me. Unfortunately, it was my uncle who made night visits to my room. Good story.