All Comments on 'Bimbo or Billionaire: Holiday Special'

I missed these please pretty please with cheese keep them coming!

Thanks anon. I tend to write one a year at the moment and I do have an outline done for another one so it's just a matter of when I get to writing it.

IMHO the stories would be hotter if there would be one big hardcore thing added at the Fetish mental change, like if one contestant would end up in an incest relationship, other one having the need to be pissed on and another one would end up having a need for people to look inside her gaping ass. just one big hardcore thing at the end.

That would certainly be one way to go, however the gameshow portion of the story is intended to pretty light hearted overall, so I doubt I'll be adding something like that.

@TheHandsThatLead I understand it's your story so do it as you want of course. however I would not say that "story is intended to pretty light hearted". These stories are about hipnotizing normal women who are made into becoming prostitutes like in BoB: inherence story where a girl if angry to even be in a show, and ends up giving blowjobs for 10c. I would call this pretty hardcore. their tits are being enlarged without their consent and they littrally lose their intelligence and free will. I do not think adding a paragraph about other fetishes would make these stories more hardcore

I guess we all have different definitions of "light hearted/hard core" 🤷

I could argue that all of the changes are consensual as they've signed up to be contestents, but since it's all fantasy I don't think I have to 😉

I wouldn't stop someone else from writing such a story, just not the kind of thing I'm interested in exploring.

Like many others, I'm pleased you created Holiday-special in the episodic series. Well done with keeping a realistic banter of conversation between the host & contestant, as it helps keep the reader grounded in what aspects of the work are 'fantasy'. Very enjoyable piece!