All Comments on 'Bimbo Outbreak Pt. 08'
by Menoetes
- 17 Comments
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLoving the story so far, my only worry would be a bit more focus on toms storyline. I do get that you need to branch off to provide context for things going on, but it really slows down the pacing quite a bit, which could result in a fairly abrupt possibly ending unless your intent is to make this story quite lengthy chapter wise, given that you mostly do a few pages at a time.
Menoetesalmost 2 years agoAuthorThanks for the helpful and constructive feedback, Anon! You are correct in noting that I am branching out a fair bit at this point in the tale to explore the world of the XXX plague a bit more and give a the story a broader visual scope but I agree it has slowed down Toms side of things a fair bit.
No fear though, dearest reader, there is a plan and a lot more of the story to go. Things will tie back in together over the next three-ish chapters or so. That's approx. 15k words with how I write, so not too long. Then things really kick off.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoKeeps going! maybe you could write a little more of the sisters in the school
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI wonder if they're getting more coherent because their brains are getting used to whatever chemicals/hormones are driving them, similar to how drug addicts require higher doses to get high
Anonymousover 1 year agoLove this series so far and hope it continues. Would love lots of anal sex, facials and more titfucking.
Menoetesabout 1 year agoAuthor@jkthekat - I'm really glad you are enjoying my silly smut. Bimbo Outbreak was my earliest work, so is a little rough and unpolished but I had fun writing it 😋
Anonymousabout 2 months agoLove all of your writings, to date. I'm looking forward to continue reading "all" of your work. I find it interesting to see what Pam is up to and how Tom reacts.....be it caffeine or Dr Turner's vaccine. Again, great work
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