All Comments on 'Bimbo Outbreak Pt. 18'

by Menoetes

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KellvallonKellvallonover 1 year ago

Good work. Glad to see the story progressing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing! Love where the story is going. Can't wait for the next chapter.

RedHectorRedHectorover 1 year ago

I'm loving where you are taking this story. Great work so far. I am impressed by your ability to effectively convey a smooth and unstilted action scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't wait for each weeks chapter. Keep up the great work

lordvisciuslordvisciusover 1 year ago

While I wish there were some sex scenes i do love the world building and advancement of the plot/ main story. I cannot wait to see who comes out on top when these opposing factions inevitably clash in the bedroom.

MenoetesMenoetesover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for all the kind feedback, Dearest Readers. I'm working hard on a (hopefully) epic follow-up chapter that I call "The Alpha Strikes Back" in my own mind and it's going to be a big one. So please bare with me. I will, of course, do my best to make it as sexy and silly and smutty as possible for your reading enjoyment. Stay tuned!

IjustcantstopIjustcantstopover 1 year ago

Just binge read the 18 chapters, I love it. Now I have to impatiently wait for new chapters like everyone else 😒

DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtmeover 1 year ago

Absolutely love it so far

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting but where ever this is going is taking too long and where is that? Too many side stories like that cop for no reason. Tighten it up

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Oh hi, I didn't see you there... Hailing from the Asphodel Meadows of Hades, Menoetes writes silly smutty stories to entertain and titillate. You'll find all manner of delectable themes in his sordid tales. These include mesmeric Mind Control, hot Harems, tantalizing Taboos...

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