by Menoetes
I'm loving where you are taking this story. Great work so far. I am impressed by your ability to effectively convey a smooth and unstilted action scene.
While I wish there were some sex scenes i do love the world building and advancement of the plot/ main story. I cannot wait to see who comes out on top when these opposing factions inevitably clash in the bedroom.
Thanks for all the kind feedback, Dearest Readers. I'm working hard on a (hopefully) epic follow-up chapter that I call "The Alpha Strikes Back" in my own mind and it's going to be a big one. So please bare with me. I will, of course, do my best to make it as sexy and silly and smutty as possible for your reading enjoyment. Stay tuned!
Just binge read the 18 chapters, I love it. Now I have to impatiently wait for new chapters like everyone else 😒
Interesting but where ever this is going is taking too long and where is that? Too many side stories like that cop for no reason. Tighten it up