by InLeaves
Contemporary women are all like this "Brooke"...sour, taciturn, frigid, insular, and frankly sexless. "Trixie Smiles" is an improvement, a lovable, sweet, cute, playful, and affectionate girl, with a gift for entertaining people (singing) and making them like her. She is also a hot little "fuckbunny" who likes her sex, and is quite alluring and cute as well.
All things considered, a remarkable improvement where womanhood is concerned. I'll take a "Trixie Smiles" over your frigid and paranoid feminist modern woman any time!
It's really too bad... Trixi seems nice enough and all, I wouldn't mind meeting her. But I kind of like who she was much more, maybe because she was real?
:o
You have great writing skills, I got fully pulled into the story. But, being a woman myself, that was the most terrifying thing I've ever read. Wonderful writing skills, but feels absolutely dystopian to me.