All Comments on 'Bindings of the Subjugator Ch. 02'

The game's afoot. Another excellent chapter.

This was very engaging to read. The backstory of the protagonist is sad and compelling, and her journey in a short time satisfying to watch. Honestly, the whole premise of the story is incredibly dope, it will be interesting to see how this concept is developed, as well as the characters and their relationships. Hope you had fun writing.

Hello dear readers! Sorry that chapter 3 is taking so long, but know that I haven't given up on this project. I actually had to rewrite the whole chapter a few times because I just wasn't satisfied with it. I know where I want to take these characters, but geting them there in a believable and satisfying way was giving me a headache, so i took a step back for a few weeks to refocus myself. Also, you know... holidays, busy times. But im back into it now and I've more or less untangled my mess, so chapter 3 should be submitted soon...ish.