All Comments on 'Bird Hunt'

Interesting. Not perfect, or what I was looking for. Yet it made my cock cum all the same.

It was a great story with even greater writing. Your concepts are unique in a way no other story can replicate. The only shame is how long the process of writing unavoidably is. You are the best author I've come across so far on this site.

I think the word you were looking for is 'feminine', which means having qualities or an appearance traditionally associated with women. 'Femine' means woman or wife.

Thanks for the comments, everybody!

Sorchsak, thanks for the advice, that word messes me up like few others lol

Qazzovera, that is a really nice comment. I try my best and I'm glad you liked it!

Anon, your comment is one of my favorites of all time lmao

I love this story and the dynamic between the characters. I especially love how sassy the harpy is!

I have a podcast where we learn about a monster/creature/cryptid then read an erotic story about them. It's called Love at First Sighting. Your story may fit for one of our creatures and I'd love to read it on the podcast.

If you have any questions about that please reach out to me!

lafspod@gmail.com