All Comments on 'Birthday Cake'

good story please update but do hope that this is one of the stories where the bad guy gets arrested in the end or she gets pay back not one where she all of sudden likes it

'There goes visitation rights!'. Sorry, just had to say that. Besides, she's 18.

"No, your dad isn't coming!"

"But why?"

"I told you, he has a problem with birthday parties."

"But there won't be any high-heels in his size there!"

"That's not it and Maggy has big feet."

"I won't invite her. Besides, I'm an adult now..."

"It's still my house!"

Oh boy. Very cruel story. Well written with a lot of imagination. The last sentence was disturbing, almost as if she had a slight suspicion as to what he was capable of, only that he wouldn't do it to her.

Shot for story!

Sorry, the 2nd last sentence, not the 1st.

This one is great. Love the force and daddy/daughter combo. I like that there is no happy ending. That's such a cop-out.

This story was so eerie to read, sending chills down my back at the father's switch from being "loving" to, well, a jerk. Very interesting read.

Add more. Does it just last for the day? Do he make her personal liitle slave what?

I really can't wait for a continuation of this story! I've read it a few times and it's always a delight! Amy seems like a very sweet girl and I can't wait to see how the rest of her birthday party proceeds! Fantastic job!

I want my daddy to do this to me

Love this can't wait for part 2.is daddy going to give her some bday spankings and take her analy

Oh my god this is hot. I keep rereading and cumming every time. I love daddy being loving and then being uncaring and taking what he wants. Cannot wait for chapter 2

Well, it's different. Apparently the writer was turned on writing it, and others will think it's exciting too. Speaking for myself, I thought it was rather sad. If I can't find it stimulating because I'm feeling too bad for the victim, then for me at least, it's failed as erotica. Of course, the fact I feel so bad for the imaginary daughter in this story, does show the writer is talented at their craft. Different strokes for different folks. Had I been able to rate it, I would have given it one star. Not my cup of tea.