All Comments on 'Birthday Foursome'

...as long as it's past tense. When it's present tense it reads like your fantasy, rather than your experience. And that results in a huge reduction in heat for the reader - at least for this one.

I agree with 'RyeandGingerAyle' but at the same time, you are a marvelous writer and I am excited for your next story!

You know what's crazy about this? My name is Stephanie......and my nickname is Stephy. :)

I loved it!!!!

Are they friends, family, neighbors, brother and sister.

Would like to know who is fucking whom