All Comments on 'Birthday Pool Party Ch. 11'

I enjoyed the story. The guy's stamina is amazing. When will he and Hazel get together? Will he and his daughter spend some private time in the hot tub?

That was a fun pool party with lots of had by all. Another great chapter in a well written story. Great characters carry the story along. Keep it rocking on. Let the good times and yes we need some drama too so keep the drama alive. Thanks for you time to write and publish 5 Star entertainment . Cheers

Another great chapter… I hope Ian is ok with her being with the girls because they need each other

Love it. Please keep going.

It's not finished yet? Is it?

Excellent

Fantastic story. Great writing, keep it coming!!!

Please allow Steven & Kayla private time together!

A fun read. Kayla doesn’t think the maid and butler hasn’t seen them all naked, playing? She should have run naked past the butler to her room to retrieve her strap-on. Or maybe he should bring out snacks and refreshments to the pool area.

They needed to make a circular daisy chain...........

Fantastic