All Comments on 'Birthday Pool Party Ch. 12'

Holy shit that cliffhanger was huge. I never imagined Lexi having a family outside if of what she has with Lexi and Steven.

You are doing amazing with how you are growing this world and the moments that happen like the threesome with Hazel all feel earned

That was a hot chapter with fun sexual escapades and having everyone having a great time. Well written and the cliffhanger of new arrivals. Can you say Drama. Oh hell yes lets see how this rocks on. Cheers

Can’t wait to hear more!

Nice twist. Looking forward to what comes next!

WOW! Chapter 13....Will be awesome!

Hey guys, Chapter 13 has been submitted. It should go live in a couple days. Thank you for all the positive comments and reviews!

Steven is not a "Dirty old man", the preferred term these days is "Sexy Senior Citizen"... LOL

Very good story so far. I hope you keep going long enough that we see Kith and Dave get there "just rewards"....

OMG! I started at Chapter 1,more orgasms than I've had hot dinners.

I'm worn out.

myassisdragin says "Steven is not a "Dirty old man", the preferred term these days is "Sexy Senior Citizen".

Steven is hardly a Senior Citizen at 42,he has years of life left in him yet. I should know, I'm almost twice his age. Unless Lexie and her pals ride him into an early grave.

not enough plot to keep all the sex from becoming redundant