All Comments on 'Birthday Present (Ch. 01)'

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76fellow4876fellow48about 2 months ago

What was the address of that restaurant?

I haven't read a story for some time that moved at a pace along with the story line like this one.

Well presented.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

littlewilly1littlewilly1about 2 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 months ago

Yeah! I would like the address of that restaurant also! Since you twisted my arm yes, I would like to know more about these folks! More please! As many chapters as you would like to share.

Cheers

SAGE

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 months ago

10 big blazing stars! It was the magic ring! Buster2U

WoodencavWoodencavabout 2 months ago

Awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Darque_LyteDarque_Lyteabout 2 months ago

I am very curious where this story will go. Was fun to read.

uboat1uboat1about 2 months ago

Great start! Oh the possibilities

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Fantastic, great scenes, and a mystery partly revealed.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale8 days ago

An amazing fantasy, well told.

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