by TUnicornLiterotica2
Not bad but could have been so much more. For instance, what the teacher whispered to Carla. I'm hoping this leads somewhere.
I was hoping he would fuck her in front of everyone. God, that'd make me so damn wet. Hope that's next.
Not very good. You don't tell us what Carla is thinking during the depantsing and the spanking.
The only thing wrong with this story is that you never revealed what the teacher told her.
Was it a threat?
Was it a compliment?
Was it an order?
Was he teasing her?
The latter 3 indicate that they knew each other before this class. You didn't even write another story to explain it. Just a few lines would have sufficed. Something like:
Carla's ass hurt but it was by far the lightest/hottest punishment her father/stepfather/uncle had given her.
OR
The pain she felt as she sit down was a gentle reminder to never disobey her master again.