All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise Ch. 04'

But pretty good sex writing.

Was there more to your comment? All i see is the "but pretty good...." part. Thanks for reading.

Did I miss something. I thought the only three players in this story were Lee, Rachel, and Carolyn - but then near the end someone named Lauren is suddenly involved. Need an editor much?

I understand, most people don't read the whole thing. I sure don't. But its clear. They went outside. Their neighbor saw them, and watched them. She never gets involved with them. If you think its unbelieveable, fine. But its not because I didn't explain it.

Thanks for reading.

This is the way to get your wife pregnant!

Could have some more chapters. What about Carolyn and Lee's turn until completion? Did Rachel get pregnant or did they need a repeat? Did Lee and Rachel get Carolyn to return in a few years to get pregnant with their next child or so they get Lauren to help? Or perhaps Lauren requests Lee and Rachel's help in the future? Lots of fun possibilities.

Mfj

Maybe she gets pregnant maybe not. If they do have a child I really hope they are good at coparenting because this "marriage" is as good as over. His friend Carolyn wants to run off with him and never look back. She doesn't respect the marriage. The next door neighbor is getting off on watching him cum in someone else. Chances are she'll try for some. Rachel doesn't want anyone taking a load from her husband, stupidity considering him ni

Ot coming in Carolyn's cunt to not be sex.