by TommyBoyinNC
Pretty nice first-time story but it would be even better if written in first person style from Matt's point-of-view. Example: "Oliver placed his hands on Matt's head and pushed him to his knees. Matt's eyes were now fixated on the hard cock being presented to his mouth." This would be much hotter as: Oliver placed his hands on my head and pushed me to my knees. My eyes were now fixated on the hard cock being presented to my mouth."
Larry