by Kabba118
I'm not at all religious, but I really enjoy the realism of the way you included it. I can't understand why so many people are aggressively put off by it.
Different perspectives are important for good writing.
I like the religious piece you have included. It an important part of many couples lives. Not for everyone but bdsm is not for everyone either.
Sigh. I was really enjoying this until the religious bullshit. Immediately skipped here to leave a comment, and dropping the rest of the series. Unfortunate.
Truly a fantastic story, with such well-written characters. I love it. Absolutely love it
Open and honest communication is the key to them making this work. They have been deeply attracted to each other for months - everyone around them could easily see it - yet the stubbornly refuses to talk about their feelings. It was clear from the first “not date” how they both felt but they allowed this friendship idea to put up a barrier. I hope that teaches them a lesson about communication and putting the other first. And ok, I hate this Yosef dude. I know this last happened before they connected but if he comes back into the picture, I’m gonna shit a brick! Keep up the progress as they fall into love with each other and co-care for little EJ. That kid has been through way more than enough! Loved how Jack swooped into protect him. As great of a dad as Ethan is, he lets EJ see and hear way too much between adults in his life. The language, arguments and drama (not to mention the violent encounter between E and Trish) are just way too much to expose a 2-3 year old to. Ethan needs to cut that out pronto.
I’ve read this series several times and this chapter hits me right in the ❤️❤️❤️. Every time.OMG! 🤩🤩🤩
If I could remember my username, I’d definitely add you to my favorites list!
love this story so much i hope there is more to come.... and fast im addicted
I love your story and can't wait to see how it develops - I sure hope there will be more chapters. You've created intriguing characters with lots of love to share. I also appreciate that you've even weaved a bit of faith into it - and for a change you're not pushing a bunch of anti-Catholicism. Anyway, thanks for a great read so far and here's hoping for much more!