All Comments on 'Black and Blue Ch. 01'

get ice out or he is dead

your political rants. As always, a great beginning, lots of stuff to work with. In the old days, we used to define an 'expert' as anyone who was more than 50 miles from home. But, that was when 50 miles was a long way............

The next chapter has been uploaded, and hopefully will be published soon.

And please remember that while the story may be inspired by real events, do not make the mistake of thinking this is non-fiction. Things are embellished, combined, separated, etc., to fit the literary purposes of the story.

First let me say it is good to see you back. Now as to the great start of this story, I agree very strongly with the other readers that it is time to get the CI out. Keep it coming

I did have a chuckle about the comment on "experts". People in my group have long known that "expert" is really a "relative term". EX - is a "has been" and a SPURT is a "drip under pressure" - plain and simple. STILL -- fantastic story and KEEP 'EM COMING!

You can also define EX as an unknown variable in an equation. Expert then becomes 'an unknown drip under pressure'. As to the 'non-fiction', well.....🧐🧐🧐🧐

but sometimes words are the worst offenders and causes for fact. TK U MLJ LV NV

An old, retired cop really enjoys your stories.

Has Don enough time to extract Ice Cube?

*****This is getting real good. Thanks for sharing.