All Comments on 'Black and Blue Ch. 03'

Brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A wonderful story.

Ahhhhhh another white "baby mamma" for the welfare rolls. Heart warming isn't it? LOL Just gives up her career as a police officer and works to become a "baby Momma" for black babies. Great Writing, Powerful Story. Great Effort. Thanks, Buster2U

Brutal, well-written. Great story but, not for me.

Great story ! Can't wait for the next chapter ! Well done.

Claire will fall in love with the Closer after Desiree gave him tact approval to take her as his wife. Pregnancy changes Claire into loving the Closure more and his mother Desiree as her mother in law. Baby pump grows into her and she goes with Julius on vacation in Miami, Florida where the bonding increases after the baby was revealed to be a boy! They visit her mother and Claire felt so ashamed about Mom's reaction to Julius.

Desiree has an idea to invite Mom over to her house where she will be flummoxed into becoming friendly with black people and Desiree takes advantage of Mom's naturally born submissiveness to host a dinner party for black people who will give her so many hugs and kisses especially the black women rubbing their breasts against her luscious breasts to break down her resistance as Desiree makes Mom work harder in cleaning the kitchen by undressing her naked in front of her guests. Finally Desiree hugs Mom with tongues interwining into open mouths to mark Desiree's taking ownership of Mom forever as Claire fulfills her obligation to bring her Mom for Julius's Mom Desiree.

Mom becomes the doted Grandmother of Clare and Julius's children with Desiree becoming the active personable Grandmother with Mom becoming the shy, submissive nobody to the grandchildren.

The black man just wants to breed? Ain’t animals, you know.

Great series. Please write more! It is very good, well paced, and convincing, which is very seldom! Great Job!

Another great story from one of my favorite authors!!

Brillant

Great story. With Officer Doyle gone, how will Claire fit in? Who's the driver of the mysterious silver Camry? What's he want with Claire?

Good so far needs to be finished.

Has she been bred, what are rules 9 & 10, who is the mysterious driver following her, when will the Closer share her? Answers hopefully to follow soon.

Good story. Hope chapter 4 will be up soon. I have a few ideas of who is following Claire

Crimfolk, I love your writing and your characters, particularly the powerful and seductive men.

Such a great story but I really want to see how claire can handle her life as a baby maker for the black race

great story paced well i love all your storys is this part of mr taylor related maybe we see some crossover charactors Jessica,Emily Dee and others excellent job looking forward to chapter 4

Every time I read this story I get very aroused and I can't wait for a follow on I want to see how Claire follows the rules of the Closer

It is one of the best I have read so hurry up Crimfolk and let me know how Claire turns out to be a mother

There is nothing hotter than breeding stories, so please continue with this and others.