All Comments on 'Black and White'

Different take on things. I would have liked this to go longer, but I know short is your style. <3

You are such a trash writer. This feels like AI.

yes it sounds like AI

Random word generator more likely. AI would do much better,

It is not AI, but it has me wondering why you would think that (?) I can promise readers that I will never resort to AI to write my stories. I can't see why I would bother.

Maryanne

Because it’s grammatically terrible. It has no real plot or sentence structure and the ideas are poorly fleshed out. Learn how to write. Because this looks like AI word jumble.

Your stories are great, I especially enjoy the darker mindfcuk ones. Please ignore the haters, your grammar is unique, flavorful and enjoyable.