All Comments on 'Black and White'

"Girl, you haven't been fucked until you've been fucked by a hung brother," - Why does it have to be a hung BROTHER? Forgetting that size is over-blown, why wouldn't ANY hung guy do it for her?

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The story is being told in first person by the MC, how does he know what was said or happened out of his presence?

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"I'm sorry it just happened Tina," -Yeah, like he didn't put ANY pressure on her!

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No real ending and POV shifts ruin what could have been a half-way decent story, though the silly BBC is a dumb trope.

you mean slirpuff has passed or just no longer writes. he is not on storiesonline

Dear readers this writer is no longer with us

Wow the one white gut that took it back! We were all wondering who that guy was. Hahaha

I think the previous comment says it all⭐️

A cheating black skank and a wimpy white cuck

You never ended this story. You just stopped writing.

It is one of your weaker tales.What really hurts it is credibility..#1-no spouse would take/accept another spouse bringing home someone else to fuck all night rubbing it in their face.#(2)No husband/man would take a wife back with the entire community knowing about what went down if he has any ego, self respect or integrity..You authors have got to give your heads a shake and quit using kids as an out for

reconciliation..It's tiring and very misguided. For some marital infractions its acceptable.For infidelity there is no excuse period..Yes husbands may love a wife enough to die for them,but certainly not enough to accept being stabbed in the back with infidelity. Infidelity simply destroys far more to a relationship than just the sex act.Good story though,worth the read and 3*s..JZK

zijn gemengde relaties echt zo'n groot probleem in Amerika? wat ben ik blij dat ik in nederland woon. mijn partner en ik zijn nu al 25 jaar samen en we hebben beide nog nooit een opmerking over onze verschillende huidskleur gehad.

Urg?

Not one of your better ones.

Ending was weak, woulda maybe been possible to reconcile if not for the ghetto grapevine spreading the story around but under the circumstances she'd just be settling as that dirtbag really ha invaded her mind. Now she belongs to the streets.

Pure, unadulterated,interracial Femdom agitprop. Waste of time.

For some odd reason the fact that he brought like five girls and fucked them all in their bed--while she was fully aware in the next room, and I assume she could hear it--kinda equalized the equation lol. He hurt her just as bad, I guess. She's a bitch/whore, and now he's an asshole/dick. Equal lol. So this reconciliation doesn't seem so egregious...I mean in story life, not real life.

Irl that bitch should be divorced and gone that very night.

Very entertaining story. I liked it

Too short story. It needs more to feel real.

Odd story. The author has a fascination with the mythical 12 inch penis. Look up online how improbable that is even black men. Something like less than 1 in 10 million. She had an obsession and the guy Chris forced himself on her. It was pretty close to rape and she gets caught by hubby and the two kids. None of that is discussed. No reason why. Just outright exile. Then she lives in the house while he is banging chips steadily. Then a weird non ending. If he saw what had led up to it with all her obsession. Then yeah good luck getting past it. But if he saw what happened when Chris showed up and before the discovery, he woukd have killed Chris. She resisted, said she was married, can't do this, and he said it was happening anyways and forced it. Yeah she could have screamed (empty house), could have slapped him (Chris would have beaten her up), clawed him (maybe? how woukd that work out?) and then he hammered her with his mythical super cock and she was overwhelmed for a few minutes and suddenly discovery. So yeah close to rape. She didn't forcefully reject Chris but she didn't give consent that day. Of course other times she was staring at his truncheon, touching it, and fantasizing. That was the worst part, the obsessive buildup and that left herna bit hesitant when Chris made his rapey move on her. Then story goes to crap.

Wimpy ending, not worthy of the effort put into the first part. Should have more to the reconciliation section.

How could there be "a lot of other good things."??

In a terrible relationship like this one? How in the fuck could there be anything left?

She meets a black dude with a big dick and can't resist it at all? So how could the MC husband ever trust her again?

And then he goes out and picks up 5 or 6 randoms and brings them home and fucks them in the house where his wife is at?

How could she ever trust that if he gets upset ever again...that he isn't just gonna go out and fuck some random tramp again?

Sorry...this marriage is broke and one hate fuck doesn't fix jack shit. And trying to portray it this way? Unrealistic and kinda dumb. Lazy ending.

The swapping between Chris & Shannon's thoughts/ perspectives was clumsy and confusing.

Horrible place to end the story.

This LW concept of married women who are in love with their husbands just ending up in bed with another guy without any conscious thought or effort is just a sad cliche.

Sister Shannon the cheap hoe for a big black cock

3, average. While I wasn't a big fan of the racial stuff it was understandable under the circumstances, the husband was angry. Not sure if the anger justified him sleeping with women to punish his wife when her action, while messed up, weren't meant to hurt him but not a negative either. Also didn't mind the reconciliation but felt very rushed. Felt like their needed to be another page dealing with the anger and forgiving.

Shannon should have had Dan charged with rape.That would get him off his high horse.Bringing women home to fuck in front of his wife is despicable.

You for allowing us the readers to make comments because so many other authors are afraid to allow criticism, I can name that made a comment here about your story it really is a shame.

this brought back to meny bab momores for me, hit to close to home ,i would never have taken her back

Good story until the ending. I do like reconciliation endings but this one was to rushed. You don't go from hating her to loving that fast.

Another Great Story..

Not much of an ending. Their reconciliation is they have drunken sex where he is rough with her? She says basically nothing. He resorts to multiple trysts with other women.

And enough with the trope / myth of massive cocks. 12 inches is practically unheard (like real 12 inches not the made up porn start dimensions for publicity). Blacks are 0.5 to 1 inch longer on average than whites with a slightly wider standard deviation. 13 inches is like six sigma. Good luck using that as a realistic story element. Ruined the emphasis that she was attracted to the guy, and yes he was packing (but really 12 inches???), and they committed adultery. Does she ever even apologize or get a chance to say anything? Odd.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

Hard to get a high score with anger followed by reconciliation. I think that is too bad. People screw up. One way to write about it is to have them burned at the stake and suffer eternally in hell. That is baseline for some of this crowd. I tend to think finding the way back makes for better stories. This was one of them. 5 from me.

An ending is needed. Please finish. LP

You seem to have got bored with your own story. The ending is far too rushed.

wow that will learn her,,, repeat in 10 9 8,,,

Y’all motherfuckers are racist as hell on this site. Obsessed with black dick for better or worse. I bet you really like the taste of black sperm for real

Started good, got intense in the middle, then went limp dick at the end. Typos, spelling was off and grammatical errors out the wazoo.

The fucking tags are all over the place again. The wife is black so "white wife" is wrong. The guy she cheats with is black so it would surely not be "interracial adultery"... Fuck this shit.

BEST... STORY... EVER!!! But, the two black brothers should have cut Chris' dick off.

Good story. Chris is a predator and doesn't deserve just a beating, unless he finishes in a box Mixed race, yes, but they and their families really loved each other. Time for another sister or brother for the kids, and guaranteed, she won't cheat again. She knows what she'd lose... Good story, please write another chapter...

Did need more or another chapter but was good.

Oh the story was a good idea, but you have to read it again ( or get someone else to) put it in the first character or the second, you keep jumping around, takes away the flow of it,

chapter 2 perhaps!!!!

This guy is in a interracial marriage with two bi-racial girls. It is obvious his in-laws like him and have his back. He wife was an idiot but loves him. The “one and done” scenario, in my opinion, doesn’t apply here. She is remorseful and has stayed around while he was also committing adultery so for the sake of the girls and their future without him around, they should be going to counseling and trying to make it work. She never disrespected him or belittled him with the other guy and although she ended up having sex she was really sexually assaulted at the beginning. She never approached Chris for sexy but after he was banging her her body took over. Rec. in this case is warranted.

Huh...well shiitttt.

Cuckold

Ahh Jesus Christ man you can’t end it like that. Atleast write a scene or two with some therapy. But having her move back! That’s when the story started taking a nose dive.

Now he's her cuckold bitch, and Chris is going to be coming by to hug his little baby and have fun with his wife. It's going to become easy for him to hear his wife say, "pump me with that big cock!" I always love my Ugandan black wife cuckling my white ass.

Needed editing.

Once is forgivable, she screwed up, paid for it in more ways then one. This was a very good story.

Couple of grammar errors which is unusual for you. Basically pretty good. I thought he overdid the revenge fucks and especially with the kids around.

... with an abrupt nothing ending. He brings home a bunch of sluts to punish her and have his itch scratched, she meekly puts up with it which is complete bullshit, he pretty much rapes her and they're fine the following morning. Um, what? Terrible ending for what started out to be a decently set up, if cliche premise.

Good story

She screwed up

She should have slapped the shit out of him as soon as he touched her

But no story

Or

Maybe a better one

I will buy reconciliation this time

Forgiveness is easier part forget and trust again?

I read bigmouth before this one.

So, in that one, she didn't physically cheat, but when I finished it, I still felt totally unsettled. I didn't comment on it, or rate it, because being so unsettled, I didn't feel I had the right to 'judge'. However, the addition of the kids in that story led it to the final reconciliation. I felt, without that element, their marriage would have burnt to the ground in no time flat.

Kids do make a difference. I think even the judge's ruling was partly to try and help the innocent victims of the breakdown... not the original crime, but the toxic fallout after. I think that same thing factors here.

This one also left me unsettled, just the same as the other.

The actions by the husband after, though, go beyond acceptability. Two wrongs don't make a right. I would never accept a revenge fuck if I had stepped out, but I wouldn't have stepped out in the first place. If I ever got to that point, it would be a sign of massive marital problems. If that were the case, if I had lost that much in my relationship, I'd call it quits first. So it's my own knowledge in my standards that could not accept my wife fucking anyone, for any reason. That would be the death knell. This man is no better than his wife, in the end.

So, I guess, my story would never end up as a loving wives' one, I suppose. Well... I hope. Lol.

Just a little more of a rant for you. There is a line in it... "This wasn't rape... "

Sorry, it was. She may have relented, she may have even got into it... but she still was being abused at the start, and she still said, "please don't do this". That's rape. Anybody want to argue with me?

This story ended up being a tale of two very despicable people, both weak, both wrong, both doing things that cause untold damage in the real world, even if she did do it first.

All I can say is heaven help those kids.

2 stars from me on this one, without any ambiguity.

that all black men are well-endowed as all white men are not. The difference percentage is just about the same in both races, if you compared within the race group. A black girl curious about the white guy is believable; but a black girl curious about the black guy isn't believable at all.

Too many of the racial stereotypes, especially Chris, in this story to make it. All of your stories are good, I didn't particularly care for this one.

RePhil.....feel free to actually write something, submit it and open yourself up to criticism.....go ahead, we're all waiting.

I liked the idea, the plot of the story. But there were a couple of things I didn’t like. First, the ending was rushed. It’s hard to believe that all the anger he had dissipated almost instantly just because he came home drunk one night and practically raped his estranged wife. There’s more to the story and it should have been included. Secondly, to the author, please pick a “person” and stick with it. And by that I mean please stop switching back and forth between first and third person. Sometimes in the same paragraph. It can be confusing as hell. One last thing: it’s a shame that in this day and age that a story of a bi-racial marriage- gone-bad would generate so many racist comments from readers. I thought the Literotica “powers-that-be” were monitoring and/or censoring all comments now. I guess flat-out racism doesn’t bother them. D.

A decent story, good plot. Portions felt a bit short or rushed while the ending was a tad lacking.

Except Dan is a real man, not a cuck. He's also not gay.

Good story overall. Would've liked to see what happened next.

Perfect picture of the typical white ass wimp that can’t hold a candle to a black cock. Guess all those white cops in the US of A know something we don’t lol

I woiuld have LOVED to see this story twist, with Shannon and Chris with a LONGER lasting affair with Dan being cuckold and sharing her fine ass.

This wasn't BTB nor RAAC. Shannon paid a price for her indiscretion. She got to hear what she was missing when Dan brought home dates to loudly get pleasured in the way she got for 10 years.

No, Dan did not rape Shannon. This become obvious considering she did nothing to resist. Shannon baited the hook by being dressed to entice, entered into Dan's bedroom while he was undressing and told him to not bring home any more dates. Then she reeled him in by feinting that she did not want to be taken 'like that'. Sure, he gave her anger sex, but it seemed like she was ready for it to the point of being hot, wet and finally climaxing. I can imagine her mother counselled her that if she wanted get Dan back she needed to get him claim his woman back without him realizing it. Considering they continued to make out like a loving couple in the morning, I would guess she succeeded and are on their way to resuming their marital relationship.

I didn't really think it was racist. Easy to see how he can get so mad when your SO cheats on you. I thought it was a lot better than the score indicates. That ending was super short though like what happened after that?

I've read it before. Still good. Throwing away a good marriage is tough. How many guys have made the same mistake, and not caught? Calling someone trash, or slut, or anything else isn't right for one indiscretion, or mistake, in my mind. Living requires a person to make mistakes, or it seems so.

unfaithful mudhark, put her with the rest of the

trash

1 star slurp puff tale

"The average length of an erect penis is 5.16 inches"

Thanks China and India.

Your for you're. POV's change all over the place. This is dreadful.

is less than you think. The average length of an erect penis is 5.16 inches (13.12 centimeters) and the average circumference is 4.59 inches (11.66 centimeters), according to a new analysis of penis length studies involving more than 15,000 men around the world. As for a flaccid penis, the average length is 3.61 inches (9.16 centimeters) and the average circumference is 3.66 inches (9.31 centimeters). This is according to a study done in 2013. No link was found between penis size and race, or penis size and foot size. So this Chris guy was a freak of literature.

Just another story about a pussy-whipped asshole idiot. He deserves to have a cheating whore for a wife. 1 Star

I get that on this sit the myth that all black guys have dicks hanging down to knees fits into certain interracial and cuckolding fetishes or fantasies.

My personal experience belies those ideas. True a white guy born in 1953 and living in Montana cannot provide significant numbers for analysis but because of college and working in the larger towns of Great Falls and Billings I had the opportunity to have sex with a half a dozen black females. Every one told me I was bigger than any black guy with whom they had sex.

There was also an enlightening conversation I had with a group of 'working girls' letting down their hair one cold winter night in a local bar. To a one they all stated that what you see hanging flaccid with a black guy is what you got. The phrase was showers not growers

Gave it a 3 because it wasn't fleshed out.

It was too short and Shannon was 2 dimensional after her introduction.

What a racist piece of shit. I hope your wife does get fucked by some black dude. Oh, wait, first you'd have to find some ho skanky enough to date you. What an asshole.

But I have to say RePhil is a racists !! I don't care what color this person is , what he/she/it! said I racist as heel and he should be removed from here.

To the loser below. Guess what colour I am and that of my wife. Moron! Slirpuff pleas delete these comments. This forum is supposed to be about the story.

slowly!!!

Good to know that there are white wimps out there that take Black guys leavings and raise their bastard children. Lol. It's just a story and fun to see the white guy get fucked over constantly

Nothing.

same picture but from a different view, but still the same. assuming color has not been mentioned, then its the same as most. its not like most in that she still loves her husband(according to the story). everyone makes mistakes including moms and dads, but when kids are involved it puts a new dimension on things. it's hard to accept some comments that don't take into account the whole view.

this popped up a few times.

out load - out loud

As soon as Chris came into the room naked with guests there Tina should have kicked his ass out.

Even before she actually cheated she was already fantasizing about Chris.

And AGAIN with the person shifts!

One of your worst.

Don't be an asshole Huedogg. Find something else to bitch about. The story was fine as written.

@ Hue RicardGerald's story Crime & Punishment Pt. 01 has a small background story about a black carpenter (Leroy Johnson) whose wife cheated with a white man. He beat the loverboy.

The main character Patrick Sullivan is a DA and he asked for a small punishment.....

Thanks for the offering.

Who care's about big, black dick? The most beautiful trophy wives that I have met, the ones that could get any man they wanted - all go for the men with the bulge in the back pocket, not the one between their legs. Money is the real attraction for a woman. Only stupid sluts go for dick. The average woman is happy if she gets a decent looking man with a decent job. Silly story, more about a white man's insecurities than anything else. Time to man up!

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at least 4 centuries. TK U MLJ LV NV

Fairly well written, but the taking her back was kind of far fetched. I am not much on reconciliation stories and certainly not in real life. My wife knows how I feel about that kind of thing so she would know that it's one strike and your out. I wouldn't even get one strike with her. And that's okay, because we shouldn't need any wiggle.

So, I agree with the Princess. 2 stars cause he took her back.

the reason for the rating, is that it showed, how usually love will prevail. mistakes are made on both sides of the isle, as long as you recognize it, and correct it, it becomes a learning experience.

Where have you been? ALL black men have 12 inch dicks and they know how to use them so that every time they fuck a woman, that woman has the best orgasm possible. It truly is the "Magic Black Dick"! LOL LOL LOL! The ending to this story didn't seem to be very logical. He's basically taking her HARD and that's going to solve all their problems? Not very likely. But hey, Slirpuff wrote it, so like the magic dick - it must be true!

What is it with LW writers and the "magic black cock"? Here we have a reasonably intelligent, married adult woman with kids, and all she has to do is look at a big black cock and she loses her mind?

And what kind of a guy, pussy hound or not, walks around naked in an apartment when there are guests present?

When a woman considers how great it would be to try a big cock, why isn't the next thought "how would I feel if my hubby went after a big set of tits?" Or ass? Our whatever?

And obviously the same for the flipside...

People is so stupid... =)

Seems unlikely. And the entire ending felt like wham, bam, thank you ma'am. Too fast. I don't understand how raping his wife allowed him to set aside hating her for cheating. Not one of the authors better offerings. It just didn't make sense.

and the kids rule the kingdom, TK U MLJ LV NV

Can see this was one where it could happen but not up to usual Slirpuff standard.

Finished too quick after he basically raped her and tried to justify it.

Kind of distracting with the constant switching between POVs.

It was rape, but she led him on first!!!! The ho shouldn't have let herself be put in that sitch either!!! 2* because he took her back!!!

But this one kind of worked for me. My wife is black, but that doesn't matter. She already knows what would happen to her and Asshole if she cheats, and I know what would happen to me and Ho-Bag (her term) if I cheat. We had a good long talk about it before we even got together as full time lovers. I won't go into details, but we understand each other perfectly. Both of us have been cheated on in the past, so we aren't going down that road.

The thing I had the most problem with was that Asshole basically raped Wifey. She told him NO, but he kept going. He should have been thrown under the prison in addition to having the shit stomped out of him. Wifey should have come right out and said that he raped her, too.

4 Stars for this one.

Poor; start to end. Interesting ideas, undeveloped.

Blink blink

I thought the low score was due the racial nature of the story.

As a skilled writer (except with homonyms and grammar and such) you are able to give us mulitple reasons to dislike this however.

Horrible truncated ending

Unlikable characters

Unrealistic characters

Horrible racist epithets

Normally I can only fit in one or two reasons for people to hate my stories, but I sit at the feet of a master today (wink)

Good story, she should be thankful that she didn't catch a disease or that he got to nut in her... I myself have a black gf and I don't care what fucking color a guy is, if a gf of mine gives away what is mine to some douche, then there is no way in hell she can come back... Blowing the load inside the pussy is seriously intimate and unforgivable...