All Comments on 'Black Christmas'

I saw that this was inspired by a Maitland Ward scene and had to give it five stars, she's my favorite pornstar

Bloody hell, Jasmine! If this doesn't win the filthiest, most perverted, deliciously kinky competition, I'll join the celibate club for a month! I really enjoyed it (as I enjoy all of the stories your dirty mind produces.) I would have given this 5 stars anyway, but I hope that my award helps to gain you a very well deserved victory in this competition.

love ths story would love to see mother and daughter clean each other out of Drakes cum and both women to have Drakes babies

God you're a nasty slut........ wish I could spend time with you now and then. Even if it could never happen, I still would love to let you abuse me however you saw fit, mistress.

You can't write a story without lesbians and a black cock in it can you. Sad. That's all I have to say.

Haha. Ridiculously dumb.

Always good to see an IR story from you. Including one inspired by an epic porn scene. Easy 5 stars.

Incredible!

Meh. Certainly not your best, but also certainly better some of your recent ones. Expecting big things from your upcoming 600th though. You seem to always deliver big on milestones like that. By the way, there's an author called Novella23, or something like that. His stories seem like blatant ripoffs of yours, if you wish to check that out. Awaiting 600.

Dewey Cheatham

Gross, Maitland Ward is a fucking skank. No idea how in the hell she's actually married, to some idiot cuck, obviously.

very good,

hopefully more adventures,

I am sure she will perform well with a big belly

I have to say that I'm a little tired of the BBC meme. I mean, as a heterosexual male, I may not have studied black cocks as much as you have, but my understanding is that, on average, they're about the same as white cocks. The whole BBC thing is mostly a vaguely racist myth.

That being said, the other aspects of the story are pretty good.

Well Jasmine, if this doesn't figure very highly in the Winter Holiday Contest, I'm signing up to the Celibacy class for a month! I loved it. You have managed to weave filth, perversion and kink into a beautifully written story. I do hope that the 5 stars I've given this tale will help elevate it to its' rightful position when the time for judging comes.

I hope you write more of Amanda and Brandi

This is so awesome!! Pleasant twist.

Needs a part 2

As I saw big black dick destroying holes of my ex gf, I know they can be huge. And they cum hard... Great story

Extremely hot story. Hope you have a chapter 2!

I really hope we get sequel to this. Where she is taken to the pit. Could be perfect for the family night or first time night you mentioned in 7 slutty tasks. Been too long since w has a new the pit story.

Great story and the references to the Blacked scene really made it easy to get into, well done, as usual.

Bravo but more of Amanda and Brandi please

Animals breed, humans DON'T!! The 1 * signifies my dislike of that reference.

Needs a part two where it covers how big a slut for black cock her dad is. I was expecting the reason daddy missed the Christmas party was because he was out of town to help some black clients with legal help while they fucked him. Would love a chapter covering their trip to the Pit and one where daddy gets a Christmas present of fucking his baby girl while his wife is fucked my Blake and his dad and then they fuck daddy and daughter.

I’d love to read about her dear daddy cleaning them both!

Another great read. 5*

Please make a sequel out of it. Let Amanda go all the way down until she becomes pimped out by Brandi. Make her a real Bimbo with huge breasts and inflated lips at the mouth and pussy. Please get her college mate involved and let her go down that drain too. I love it

Markus

Outstanding as always

Good story mate and I love the twist and a enjoyable read but you’ve done better so I could only give 4 stars this time as 98% of you’re other stories has me coming back repeatedly to read it again and again this one may get a second read but I doubt it

Five stars. Hot sex as usual but with a bit of alphabet soup - Amanda, Brandi, cock, cunt, cum, and Drake - a, b, c, and d!

I stopped reading about a 3rd of the way through the first page.

That's some fantasy you came up with, and I just couldn't find myself believing it. I have NEVER met anyone with a chip on their shoulder like she had, that would fold like that. It is way more likely that she would record the interaction, and then play it back for her dad. Because she's a gold digging bitch.

So yeah.. You lost me not even half-way through the first page. I didn't even get to the incest/taboo part of the story. Unless she slept with her dad, there was no incest, and the new step-mom didn't have an established parenting relationship with the girl. So not taboo, just cheating, in my mind. Sorry, but you missed on this one.

Loved this one. Best you've had recently. 5 stars.

Five stars from me to, would love a part two.

This was ok still waiting continuation of hypno sissy and a couple others still my favorite author

@justplainjeff that is a dumb reason to give 1*, especially when the definition of breed is "to procreate or reproduce"

Great story, love the slut step daugther angle!

Looks to be the start of another series. The next chapter could start immediately, the two ladies go home and get to know each other better.

This was a fantastic read! 5 Stars from me

This story really need to be just the first part of another great series. Waiting for many new parts !

Liked it, but didn’t love it. Would have liked more about how they were kids. Needed more about, what did she think of him then? Were they young and it was all completely innocent, which makes choking on his cock now especially nasty? It just felt oddly detached.

As a formerly young formerly repressed person who looked down on slutty and openly sexual snd sensual people, the way she succombs to her lust so easily and quickly is totally unrealistic…well, maybe not totally…

Did enjoy the very end. What’s daddy up to? Does he get off watching his young hotwife? Do they just swing and fuck around together and separately? Is he bi and enjoys bbc too? Plenty of possibilities. Especially now that daddy’s lil girl has joined in the fun

Definitely need a part two. Hopefully she completely overcome her gag reflex and really go to town on more black cocks.

Not bad. Shame about the spelling and grammar mistakes, and yes, it does make a difference!

This is fabulous! What would be just another BBC porn scene becomes something else when it's so vividly written, and making all that cliched porn dialogue sound hot is astounding. Bravo! ♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥

Lovely ! Really need to read about her being pregnant with black babies 🤰🤰🤰

And maybe in 15 or 16 years start them fucking Mummy too 💦💦💦💦

Wow! I can't get a story published with ONE spelling error, and YOU get away with multiple errors! I guess when you have so many stories and followers, you can get away with anything.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Your BBC stories are the best you should write more please

Very hot and steamy! It wouldn't surprise me if this is based on a true story. NICE!

357. Somehow this one didn’t turn me on at all. I could hardly wait for it to climax. Sorry.

I gave it 5 stars. I just re-read it and loved it even more. Somehow the stepmother's actions were even more hot and wicked upon the second reading. She REALLY wants to not just see her educated stepdaughter corrupted, but transformed into a totally dumbed-down, out-of-wedlock slut for BBC. What has she done to the Dad? This cries out for a sequel, or a prequel showing the Dad's corruption.

Four stars. Not your best work but solid.

Great story

Would like to hear more

So where does this go? I could see them going down to The Pit and finding all sorts of fun! What a great stepmom!

Loved it! Can't wait to hear what happens at the Pti!