All Comments on 'Black Femdom POV (Takeesha) Ch. 01'

I like this story and the potential. However, it reads like English is your second language, and maybe it is. That’s fine, but please get an editor. I’m available if you want. My email is gj_sub86@yahoo.com. Feel free to contact me and I will help make your stories flow better.

Hallo Dunn81!

I love big dominant black women... and even though she's an inch shorter than myself, Takeesha sounds hot!... I can just imagine looking up through the hole in the seat of a queen's toilet chair, as Takeesha's big black butt, slowly comes down until all I can see is a little light coming in from between her legs, before darkness..

But Takeesha would have a ways to go, if she's to come anywhere close to as hot and sexy as my Jackie, at 6'4 and 240 lbs, and no fat!... Jackie, is truly a dominant Goddess!

Thank-you, 5-Stars!.... Still a little short, but very hot and sexy!

Gay Kat,

I love your stories. I would love for you to write about a stuck up southern milf being humiliated and degraded beyond her wildest dreams.

English is clearly not your language. Please let someone proofread your stories before you publish them. This is totally unreadable.

I love big dominant black women!

Thank-you, 5-Stars!