All Comments on 'Black in Me Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapters don’t jive

In your Homeless man chapter, you introduced the football player Stan during James’ second year of college. They were already very sexually active with each other and James admitted he was in love with Stan. Then in this chapter, at the end of college (two years later), the same character and description of Stan is James’ long-time platonic roommate and they just now hook up. WTF? If these are two different people, why the same name and such similarities. If they are the same, then the inconsistencies make no sense?!

buck4bearbuck4bearover 3 years agoAuthor

Understand the confusion. In my attempts to conceal their identity I named two different people the same. While very similar, they are different people - thanks for the feedback.

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Middle aged guy here, blue collar type. Gay, tend to get turned on by large masculine guys.

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