All Comments on 'Blackmail Ch. 01'

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dirtysondirtyson4 months ago

Make her do more nasty things and i hope she isn't on any pills!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great, loved it. Soon he might be an aunt eater. I've got an aunt that we share a secret with. 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please get a proof reader. It's a good story but all the mistakes makes it difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

love the story line and look ing forward to more

muskyboymuskyboy4 months ago

Slut Aunt is not erotic. This is a non-consent story with no likable characters.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Get someone to proof read your work. It was tough to read with all of the errors

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Quite enjoyed your story and would have rated it higher had you . . .

Proof Read, or had someone else Proof Read for you.

Perhaps sourced an Editor.

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