All Comments on 'Blackmail of Boss’s Trophy Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting plot idea, but awkward, stilted, unrealistic dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great twist. more action? maybe more weekends? quick blow at work? lunch date(s) with Betty? what about the limo driver more for him? thanks for sharing hope to see more.

Pappasleaze!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too short

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...