by mrmark83
How original. Of course, the author knows that as one class ends, another starts and the otger students would filing i to the fucking classroom. And I’m sure the author is uaeare that schools have glass windows inset into doors to minimize teacher/student inappropriate interactions.
The last time I checked the back of my wardrobe there was no secret passage to Narnia either...what’s your point??
Great start but slow it down, as they say Rome wasn’t built in a day. Make her get some piercings and possibly a tattoo.