All Comments on 'Blackmailed by a Bitch'

i lke this story, I want another chapter

I liked this. I would have liked to see Gloria fuck Dave's ass too. Maybe in another chapter?

Yeah, that would work.

You give the dominant, controlling bitch and male appendage without even having her use it? Come on now.

The way this story should have played out was with Gloria bouncing on his lap, and then afterwards having Dave feel really guilty about it. Then she bends him over the couch, rims him out, and shows him what Laura couldn't possibly give him. Only then should he be so willing to ditch his fiance.

He puts his cock in a shemale he is disgusted by and then straight away is comfortable touching dick. Seriously?

Very good, I would like a second chapter.

Maybe she fucks him or his fiancee.

What a beautiful description of a willing arse accepting a staining cock. !

She proved to be a very persistent seductress as she lures Dave into a new realm of pleasure. There should be another chapter or two

Don't know if you've posted stories elsewhere on on here under a different name but I read these first two and they are very good. Mine were garbage at first and have slowly been getting better. Looking forward to more of these, hopefully take them further, having them fuck the guy's wife/fiancee would be good, or them fucking him are logical 2nd chapters but the implication the shemale is wasted if she doesn't fuck somebody I disagree with.

Something I have been looking for. I wish there would be more chapters. How he slowly gets addicted to beautiful shemale love.

great story. hope you follow up with a sequel

A little sex with a shemale and he's going to leave his fiancee? That makes no sense. There's no long term future with the shemale. She blackmailed him (which was ridiculous in the first place) and suddenly he's going to forgive and forget what a lying, treacherous person she is? He'd have to be dumber than a rock to believe a word out of her mouth. More likely that he'd beat the crap out of her and tell her to never cross his path again or he'd finish the job by putting her in the morgue. Your conclusion was simply too far-fetched, even for a fictional story. No stars.

I thought it was well written and a good story. Does being the bottom in anal sex really feels so great? Does cum taste good?

Another chapter to keep me hard would be nice. I am identifying with the shemale. I would like some man to want and take me orally and anally. Where does one look for such an opportunity?

While the blackmailing was too fake, the sex is described wonderfully. 5 stars

This story had me hard the whole time. Maybe they go on the holiday together? Wish I was Dave

I normally only like it when the shemale is the top but this was written so well I was aroused throughout. Thank you

Hot story but a few concerns.

-What is the point of having a blackmailed by a bitch story when the guy is a bit of an asshole already? Fair enough if he's a prick by the end of it all but we should believe more that this is a horrible thing and sympathize with his plight for a the first few pages, before he ultimately succumbs to temptation. We, as readers, felt Laura was better off without him way too early.

-Could have done without the silly comparison of breasts. Of course his fiancees smallish natural tits wouldn't compare to the blackmailer and her big fake tits. They'd compare if the fiancee also got a boob job, or we saw the blackmailer and her flat pre surgery chest.

-I thought the 'moment of romance' bit was stupid. It's a fucking blackmail story. Even if the person being blackmailed by the end of it is into it, we should never see a scrap of romance in the story.

-In a blackmail story, the blackmailer should have been on top to assert dominance over the one being blackmailed.

Great story, ended differently than I originally expected, I thought ol’ Gloria was going to do Dave. If there is another chapter, that should be the scenario! In any regard, having sex with a trans would be great!

I would love to know how that would feel

Very romantic, but it's too bad it was at the expense of someone else. Otherwise, it was a sexy story.

I would love it if Gloria Laura had sex, Gloria needed to get into Laura's pussy with his transexsual cock, There should be a continuation of this story and Gloria should fuck Laura in the pussy and ass, hidden from Dave

This is a hot story for sure. One wonders what will happen next. What about his relationship with his fiancé? Will the ladybody fuck his ass eventually? Both of these stories beg for sequels -- what a pity so much time has transpired without such! By all means, let me know if/when you do post sequels! And in the meantime, I invite you to check out my stories posted here on Literotica! -- StoneyLodge