by LAHomedog
Damn! Great writing, extremely hot story, look forward to reading more!!!
I have been reading stories here for quite awhile and it's been a long time since a story had my interest as intently and quickly as this story has. I'm eagerly looking forward to more in the series.
I appreciate the kind and encouraging words from everyone. Thank you.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Will they tell?
Will see tell Chris?
Very nice, the story proceeds at a pace to keep our interest...
Nikki is not as 'innocent' as she comes across...?? And, she is using her knowledge to get what she wants, which I think is going to benefit all 3 of them!!
Chapter 2 coming up...ready to see how Chris and he handle the addition!! **5**Stars!!
Fine premise.
Good back story.
But Chris' playing with his cock was much too abbreviated. Too fast starting. Too fast being over. Needed to be much longer. Many more details. More step-by-step.
Four stars.