All Comments on 'Blinded'

Rape, because it wasn't who she thought it was. I bet she wishes her husband really would do her that way.

<p>Hint: If you don't understand it should have been written "...gets home FROM work to find..." then you are in need of some remedial education.</p> <p>I got as far as reading the "writer's" own description of his story and opened a story I normally wouldn't have bothered reading. When I saw how ignorant the "writer" was, as evidenced in the construction of that one line, I just had to come here to give it the lowest scores possible. That's all it deserves, and it's a pity the website doesn't allow negative numbers in the voting.</p>

Hi Anon225!

Ok, you got your first published story. And yes, only 75% because it does need some changes to be totally refined. Great imagination. Well done, you are on your way to writing more I hope? With OUR help you will do it.

Hi Anon225!

Ok, you got your first published story. And yes, only 75% because it does need some changes to be totally refined. Great imagination. Well done, you are on your way to writing more I hope? With OUR help you will do it.

I loved your first story, I think it was well written and it's my opinion you should write more! Although I don't believe it should have been listed under the BDSM catagory, it was still a great story. So keep up the good work and imagination flowing.