All Comments on 'Blindsided Ch. 01'

cliff hanger, can't wait for the next chapter and if it's as good as this one, can't for the third one. a fan always.

Get detail and a perfect set up. The tension at the end was palpable. Another amazing story from one of the best.

You've got my interest. I just wonder if I'm reading the clues correctly. Well I supose I'll have to wait and see.

DC

Talk about suspense - can't wait for the continuation. I'm enjoying this. For some reason, I sympathize with Marie and I think that there will be some unusual twists in this tale.

Can't wait for the next chapter you are one of my favorite author. Love all your stories.

Very Good, You are a very good writter. What a way to leave a story... with us wanting more.

Nice start for a very different story. Thanks!

received a 5 as usual from me. Your stories are grat. But I couldn't give you the highest marks when you said she woke up next to Dave, the black man. I fear there are to many white women fucking black men now and having heir babies. I don't want to see more doing it. We are all in the process of destroying our own races. Sad but I never felt I would see a story about a black man from you. :(

Very nice setup.

I'm wondering what the hell's going on.

Good one, patricia. Well done.

Look - your talents are strong enough that you don't need to reach for racial angst with his best friends bigger black cock for a white wife. Hubbies bestest friends bigger black cock didn't add anthing positive other than to cloyingly ramp up the sickness barrier for us honkies, blacks and other normal people who don't like black on white as a pawn for deviant attention.

This intended distortion impedes an acceptable reader thought process whether dwelling on sick for more and worse or upset and hoping it doesn't get sicker especially from someone like you. Erotic twists can be good but dark manipulations don't engender respect or credibility.

It's certainly your right but where are you - from where you were??? with lesser regard - again

As Riley always said. I sure hope there is a damn good explanation here how she DIDN'T fuck David. I can't really imagine one as I'm sure she could feel whether she had been fucked or not [usually kinda sticky] and she'd surely tell us, right?

OR maybe she was drugged and can wind up proving it and Ivan can kill David.

Other than that, her ass is grass and it'll get mowed for sure. Chopped up and spit out!!

Sure wanta see where this goes!

This story just doesn't " Sing" to me. The racial element is not it. I think that the cheating wife angle where she doesn't have a clue is the problem. I look at the rest of the story before I vote. JDseller

I just have to see where my favorite author is headed with this story. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I wanna see the continuation. Very, very erotic. Did you get preggie from this niggah?

From the protagonist's memories and descriptions, the only redeeming feature we get about Ivan so far is that he is attractive. It sounds to me like he was pulling away while she was doing more than her fair share in their relationship.

SOMETIMES, BUT NEVER COLOR BLIND. EVERY THING IS BLACK AND WHITE. TK U MLJ LV NV

Why did she wake up with David? I guess I'll find out...

Somehow I smell a setup here. It all seems too convenient somehow but I guess I’ll know when I go to the next chapter. Great stuff you have going here. Thanks for sharing.

IDB.

A fascinating start. Can't wait to read the rest.

I remember this series now. Did not like it.

“I'm sure that I was just as guilty as Ivan was in the fading away of our sex life” – Well, THAT’S a refreshing change, at least!

Hope this isn't one of those naïve-bitch-gets-drugged-n-fucked stories.

When volition is stolen or attenuated in any way, the wind goes right out the sails in these cheating wives yarns. No matter the circumstance, if she is drugged it belongs in another category. It's a lazy plot device if you ask me.

This ain't good, something's wrong somewhere. Part two coming.up.

She has no idea and the husband is waiting in the driveway to meet her sneaking to get out of the house. Oh My...

And for the rest of the story

It’ll come out but how the hell did they wind up in separate beds in the same house?

Disgusting .

Good story ruined by interracial filth .

One star

Obviously there is something ther, the fact that her memory is fuzzy about the nigth, implies that she was drugged or really...really drunk, either way the whole thing is really suspicious, since there is no hint of her feeling atracted to David to justify flirtling with him enough to bed him or an interest from his part.

@ 'Good story ruined by interracial filth'. Does that mean you'd be ok with your lady having it off with another man so long as he was white?