All Comments on 'Blizzard Holiday'

But, what about their spouses?

Good short story. Keep writing

Nice story, but you REALLY need an editor. You leave out key words at important times. When I have to insert words for the ones you leave out, it ruins the story for me. 2 stars.........

REALLY badly written...

"Well I need to be here until this weather get's better, if there is an issue with the work release daddy's desk is across the street and there is a state of emergency."

I honestly have no idea what that's supposed to mean.