All Comments on 'Blood and Ice Ch. 02'

I like the story OK, but the excess of typos and grammatical errors really make it hard for me to enjoy it.

The dialogue seems stilted somehow. Though your storyline is interesting, it doesn't seems to have a good flow. As previous readers have commented, please try to get an editor.

I am not one who looks for style or typo's, I just look for the story line. I have enjoyed reading the first two chapters and looking forward to the next chapters.