All Comments on 'Bloom Pt. 03'

This is an incredible story. Thank you

This is definitely a love story and I definitely love a good down to earth love story. Of course it's

a very modern love story.(lol) I love how very comfortable James and Kelsey are feeling with each other.

They truly feel so safe in each other's presence-I feel that z_jane is building this relationship more and more in

every beautifully written chapter with every discovery made by the MC's-It's just pouring out gallons of love.

I could feel their love here in the big city of TO. Thx for writing and keep it going...

PS- will there be any sort of conflict, sad, mad hurt feelings, maybe a little jealousy, some tears shed, maybe

a separation(a short one) feelings that this is the end of their world-of course we will need a very happy

Hallmark Christmas movie ending-we just have to have a happily ever after! (I'm not crying, you are)

Dare

Lmao, of course there's gonna be some friction between them! What's a story without some conflict? No romance is complete without learning how to handle the messier parts of your partner.

Amazing story, I love reading writing from other trans woman because their experiences shine through and bring such realism to it all. I know it’s a stereotype, but James being into MTG, Fallout - New Vegas, Zelda, and being a bottom had me giggling the whole time. Kelsey cracked that egg like a professional chef. I look forward to reading your future writing, you’re quite talented.