All Comments on 'Blown Birthday'

Ha! Freaked him out

Dump the bitch. If she is willing to be that dishonest and cruel, she's nothing but a disaster waiting to happen. Oh, get STD tested very soon.

University of Vermont is commonly referred to as UVM not UV.

It took some imagination to come up with that one. I enjoyed reading it.

Yeah, call me old fashioned, but if a lover of mine pulled a stunt like this; I don't think the relationship could last. I mean, she let another man put his lips on her boyfriend's dick. That's technically rape. I know that I'm applying real world logic to a porn story, but I guess I can't help it. I feel like this prank was pulled on the reader, even more than the main character.

Some of the dialogue is a touch formal but the obsession with her swallowing your come keeps it simmering until the prank is revealed, and that's where it kinda lost me.

Stupid

In 1970 the drinking age was 18 in the US… went to 21 in the 80s in most places.