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All Comments on 'Blue Eyes and Cold Feet'

by VeridianDelta

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More chapters

Well done. Hope there is more

MigbirdMigbirdabout 3 years ago
Nice Start

Like the start of this adventure - just enough about the two heroines, some humor and a bit of sex. Looking forward to more. Glad you started to share your imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More

This needs to continue for sure

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963about 3 years ago

This has to continue for sure, you can even slow it down some and have them reconnect with some past memories from when the crush began, Great first chaapter

RubyRedLipsRubyRedLipsabout 3 years ago
Very nice

A little abrupt and I'd like to see a more character development, but still, very nice.

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Hello, I started writing as a way to explore my own desires, at some point a friend of mine said I should share them with the world so here I am. Hope you enjoy!