All Comments on 'Bluepilled Ch. 03'

Very enjoyable. Thank you.

I've been waiting for part 3 and enjoyed reading it twice. I hope part 4 comes out soon

Can’t wait for more !!

Thanks for the kind words, everyone. I'm almost finished with this story, but I'm releasing it on patreon and Amazon first. The plan right now is a new chapter for Literotica every month, but I'll also be releasing an unrelated story this month as well.

Only one slight negative though, I wish it was longer. Would love to have seen Elle playing with Martha and then having both Martha and Kayla service her.

I was looking for a series that had mtf and drugs that change people's thoughts this is perfect please consider going further then 8 chapters

I’ll admit, going into it I expected a much more... typical story? The son succeeds in creating his pill, cures his mom, “defeats” his dad, becomes the man of the house, and starts fucking his mom the Mind Control genre obviously threw that off from the beginning, but still.

A more typical harem story I think is a lot of fun given the thrust that the magic blue pills create. Annoying woman? Blue pill. Annoying man? Blue pill. It’s overly simplistic, but that’s where the writing has to come in a hood up the story, which so far I think is doing a fine job.

I look forward to more unexpected plot. The success of harem stories is based off of making sure they don’t get overly repeat over and boring and I think you can do it.

I’m looking forward to the next installments.

ok, mark was turning into a woman and got tits, so did his dick turn to a pussy too?

Enjoying this, release more, i wanna read the rest now haha

I can only refer to you as a devilish Saint, nothing is more holy yet erotic than this

"Fried chicken, mashed potatoes, buttery corn on the cob, a large bowl full of sausage cheese balls, and a whole apple pie."

Please, I beg of you, send me the recipe for "sausage cheese balls." I must have them. I'm prioritizing this over having a mind-controlled sex slave.... I'm so worked up right now... sausage... melted cheese sauce... urrrr.

... has ruined the series for me.

I would love trying to satisfy him.