All Comments on 'Bluepilled Ch. 04'

So what happened to Ch 3?

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It takes a special man to change the world. I am enjoying this story immensely. Looking forward to reading how it continues. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

is part 3 missing?

I like how you went about putting the girls into the harem. But the fact that the father got turned into a girl and your now fucking her/him I don’t like.

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hope ch. 05 is out soon would of thought it would of been by now going by when the first 4 had been put on.

""Keep the heels, stocking and garter. The lab coat goes back on." So misogynistic... I approve. Carry on.

I really love how this story is coming along and can't wait for more!

Martha to Mia was a bit disconcerting, & shouldn't Dr Pao have been suffering from withdrawal, having only taken one blue pill?

Despite these quibbles, the story is taking shape nicely & is very hot. Thank you.

When did Martha become Mia and how did the boss become willing to suggestions since she never took a pill? Seems like some things were missing from chapter 3 to chapter 4.

He has the beginnings of a Harem. It will be interesting to see the Rich bitch's fall and become his slaves.

How much is this piil on E-bay?

Thanks for reading along, everyone! Here is this month's chapter of Bluepilled. This has been a fun series to work on and after eight volumes...there's probably still going to be a ninth volume still. That'll be the last one though for sure.

Probably.

Thanks for reading, and if you want to support my writing, you can find my patreon at https://www.patreon.com/indecentsmut

I've got lots of content exclusive just to patreon, including a brand new fantasy serial and all eight of the current chapters of bluepilled. No worries though, I'll be releasing a new chapter of bluepilled every month here on literotica.

I like it. I really like it. Definitely not a typical MC story. But, you knew the but was coming, I have to lodge one complaint. Each chapter is shorter than the previous one. Please, please try to rectify that.

This story has been great from the start. Now with the possibility of an adversary in his aunt, it's about to get even better! A fun read thank you!

Love the story but wish the names would stop changing with each chapter.