All Comments on 'Bluepilled Ch. 06'

I'm really loving the story! Thank you for updating it so regularly and I look forward to more!

To be honest, the writing Style heavily reminds me of translated novels from China. I honestly really like the style, so that's great. What I want to say is, the writing quality is really high compared to a lot of novels or stories I've read online in recent times.

The way it's written, not just the style, but the intention behind a lot of the story telling is also like the Chinese novels, it's like your going to make this a nice and long series(relative to the LE stories average character# I've read) that is ongoing for at least 15 chapters. I'm down for coming to this site just to see if this has updated.

I come to literotica honestly to just read things that are more explicit than the average novel and I need a bit of a fix instead of the writer talking around it. But your story isn't just the explicit, but interesting at the same time, using the explicit freedom here to have sexual acts thrown out here and there but not taking away from the character and world building your slowly laying out for the reader.

As I don't come here often enough, I don't have an account. Cbf making one at 1am, so...

From: 96_

The number isn't my nickname on many things, but more of something that's used constantly in many of my usernames.

As fun as this is, once all the girls become slaves, it's like they barely are people any more. Just fucktoys with some rudimentary sense of awareness and a blind desire to serve master. I prefer the stories where the mind control aspect isn't so severe and that the "victims" or targets maintain their sense of self. They only submit because it's what they truly want and they are given more pleasure than they could imagine, and thus are willing to be subservient but they don't lose the core of who they are or anything like that. In that way it allows room for lots of drama, even love and romance, which spices things up a lot. Plus it's fun to set up scenes, particularly if it's set in high school, of him taking away hot cheerleaders from arrogant asshat jocks and rubbing it in their faces. That sort of shit.

"I'm going to take over the world." Meh, could it really be any worse than its current state? I'd give him a shot at it at least.