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All Comments on 'Boating in the San Juans Ch. 04'

by DaddyO Wil

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daggettdaggettabout 20 years ago
Nice series

Good movement to the story and good sex scenes. Want to hear more of this vacation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Been there, done a BIT of that!

Brings back memories of my ex's dad's Ericson 41 sailboat. Didn't manage half the sex you do, though! DAMN!

Nice story so far.

reader_3634reader_3634over 8 years ago
Not a bad story

I gave this 4* because the story was quite good and some good descriptions of the sex action. The only reason trhat I didn't give it 5* was because of a bit of laziness in the descriptions with phrases like 'Our wives both did ...' or 'We both did .... to our wives'. Generally speaking, it is more erotic if each person is called by name and their actions are described individually. Grouping things together feels rushed.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Oh my

Oh those party games! Who ever thought up musical doggy style!

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