All Comments on 'Bob and Cora'

more shit from a shit writer.

Starts off OK but the ending begs for a follow-on chapter. What will our cowboy do next. I hope he settles it the Cowboy Way!

pathetic just like bob - 1*

Just plain hornswaggled Bob

What a dumbass cuck! FTDS!

finish the darn story!

Fuck Bob, what's your story. Guys get cheated on, fucked up, and the girl's just laugh their way out of the story.

I contacted JPB. He wrote me back he was not going to continue this story. I have an idea and wrote a second to the story but have not submitted it. I also have not asked him permission. I need an editor and can’t get a commitment. Hope JPB will give his permission for a follow up story to someone such as Saddletramp or one of the great authors here on this sight

Just plain Bob or Just a cucky Bob? What a dumbass! I could have taken a iron fist and ripped that hoe's skanky cunt!!

Regardless of recognition I don't think any man buys that line of BS. She's looking at a divorce for sure.

FTDS

Please someone. As comment next part burning both bitches

I often enjoy the authors stories, but this story glorifies successful cheating by a whore. Very poor work. Lots of loss of face for the author. Imay have to move author from my recommended list.

I don' t like the fact, she got away with it. I really, really don' t.

BUT if I put my own opinion away, I got to admit, it was a nice new twist at the end.

5 stars because you surprised me - I really hated, she got away with it!

Should've known something nefarious was happening with Pauline showed up.

I agree with Janrene, I don't love the plot, but it's clever and well done.

If I had a sequel, Bob DIDN'T fully buy it because Cora's story was too close to Pauline's. Damn near word for word: fires his suspicion that he's being played.

But this story doesn't need a sequel.

I didn't like it.

But that's the truth.

Men are pretty stupid.

Often this author writes a good story. This is not one of those times.

Stupid cuck husband, vile cheating wife, no consequences. very poor story!!!

Hahaha, nice ending, not the usual author stories

Shrug. Sometimes the women win.

She came home 2 and a half hours later and he buys it. I don’t think so!

Poor story. One star.

1 star - just another SLUT story - the MC is brain dead if he believed her crap

Needs more of an ending. Either she realizes the risk and breaks it off, or she gets caught.

He let his "little head" overrule his big head. A little sex and he believes her? Next time put an audio recorder in her purse.

And disrespectful lying bitch and a lying bitch accomplist.

That is the end? I have read quite a few of your stories. A lot of them have no ending closure. You think that most readers want stories with no end? I am a reader who likes closure. So I guess I will have to live with the way you write or check each story at the end before I start to read it.

What she meant to say was, "Sigma Gamma Hoes rule..."

this writer is unique in lw. Not only produces vast quantities, but that vast quantity is complete shit , with formulaic writing, weak character dev, and breaks almost all the standard creative writing rules, not the least of which is never providing any decent ending.

Sorry....hate an author is leaves reader without an ending........otherwise a decent story!

No this is so wrong to let him be this gullible He sniffed out the cheating - it is and was cheating eveni if she said it was for a purpose! She was playing grab ass and tonsil swabbing with other guy for several weeks. She should be gone. He is too astute to go gentle into the night. The story is too much like the one he was told to pass the smell rest. She was to into this from what he observed to be settling the asshat up. A soon as possible get a PI to shadow her at least a couple of weeks. One make-up sexromp doesn't get her out of this mess! Keep after her. The PI is worth the price for peace of mind. But still she needs to go for the lack of respect. She'll do it again. John

Another slut gets away due to stupid guy

This story is a start, but it's not finished. The wife WILL get caught, or something will happen to knock the husband over the head with facts. And if he's still not suspicious, well... Believe me, in a couple days of running back through the conversation, he'll see the holes in the story. Need to finish this story.

FTDS

This author is very good,unfortunately said author seems to enjoy writing stories with no real end.How does the bitch get caught,how does she react?Damn it those are the things I look for in a cheating wife story and these "imagine your own ending" tales are a big let down.Sorry but Ive got to just plain not read just plain bobs stories.

What a bunch of BS there better be a sequel to this story

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NOPE! Just flippin' NOPE!

I usually like your stuff, but this is just out and out TRIPE!

Sigma Gamma Rho must equal a bunch of slutty CUNTS!

-666/10!!!!!

And where is justice?

If I were Bob, I would not have bought into her story at all because it was too close to what the woman said at the bar. I would out 2 and 2 together and figure this was a conspiracy. I would hire the PI, get the evidence, and divorce her. No reconciliation because she lied and even got her soror to help in the deception. No way I’d trust her again. I hope there is a sequel to that effect.

The story was ok but the ending sucked. This guy really got the shaft. The wife and her sorority sister need to pay for their deception

This needs a sequel

Great and humorous story. This Bob is a dope.

Wow

This thing needs a sequel. We do not know how slut is going to see Big Dick in the future, and she plans to do so.

Tough story

Shame she does not really love Bob anymore, yet has deluded herself that she thinks she does.

Lying sluts are the worst, Bob is in for a life of deception and pain, and she will do it to him while claiming and thinking she loves him.

Really not smart not to watch the entire session in the car between slut and Big Dick.

not this one